Stories Matter – Part 2 of 4 – Cobla (Original)

Following up on Part 1, I am posting the original version of my story Cobla, written during a class assignment in the 6th grade. This story was originally accompanied by hand-drawn artwork and maps but due to a recent flood I was unable to save anything of the original. Thankfully I still had the original digital version of the story.

Please enjoy reading – Cobla – Original Version!

When I wrote this story I was not an avid reader at all. I actually don’t recall reading much of anything until 7th grade when I was inspired by a friend to read “The Hobbit” and “Dragons of Autumn Twilight”. I had spent significant time with the Lone Wolf book series – specifically Flight from the Dark by Joe Dever and Gary Chalk – as the “foundation” for my fantasy literature. At a hobby convention with my father I managed to pick up (for free) The Art of Dragonlance Saga (a compilation of paintings and sketches from the novels, modules and covers) and it was these two items that served the starting point for my fantasy exposure. The interesting thing was that I had not read any Dragonlance at the time and when I eventually read the books I had all that artwork imprinted on my brain.


LoneWolf  ArtDragonlance0001

The only other “stories” that I truly recall being exposed to were the Sierra games of King’s Quest, Bard’s Tale, and Black Cauldron. The idea of a king going off on an adventure, the basis of Cobla, had its roots here. If you haven’t played these games, go and play them here now! Black CauldronBard’s Tale / King’s Quest

black cauldron  Bard's_Tale_Box_Cover  king's quest

With these books as inspiration, I dove in and wrote my first fantasy story. I later wrote a sequel to it that borrowed WAY too heavily from the Lone Wolf books.

Please enjoy reading – Cobla – Original Version – just remember I was in 6th grade when I wrote this!

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A few items to note when reading these stories:

  • Please enjoy them and feel free to let me know your thoughts. A writer always appreciates feedback when attempting to grow their craft.
  • Many of them remain unedited since their original creation date and contain misspellings, improper grammar and made up words. These are in here for flavor and as a time stamp to reflect my age when they were created.
  • Over time, I hope to include “Directors Commentary” in all of my stories. Hopefully this adds some flavor and context for the creative process and my thinking as these stories were created.
  • These are being shared for the benefit of the community and ask for respect to all who read, share, and comment on the material within.
  • All rights reserved. This material may not be published, broadcast, rewritten or redistributed in whole or part without express written permission. Contact skillpointstation@gmail.com if interested.
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Stories Matter – Part 1 of 4 – Intro

Have you ever gone back and re-read the first story that you ever wrote? Fans of SPS know that in the past I was posting some legacy stories that were written in my youth, but this is something different. I’ve decided to take the challenge and re-visit the first story that I wrote (that I still have). There were stories that I wrote when I was younger but I don’t have them and don’t recall them. I just know I wrote (and drew and crafted live action scenarios for my friends and I).

Geek and Sundry recently launched a new series of on-going vlogs covering various geeky topics. One of those, Wordplay, is focused exclusively on writing and stars the outgoing, infectious, and exuberant Nika Harper. The current episode is focused on the topic of NaNoWriMo and the idea that Stories Matter. NaNoWriMo and Nika challenged writers to look back at the first story that you created, see how far you’ve come, talk about it, re-edit it, do something with it.

The story, called Cobla, comes from a 6th grade writing exercise I did in Jr. High. Everyone in class was tasked with doing this. As you can guess, the scope and quality varied wildly, but it still stuck out in my mind as a defining moment for me. It was a high-fantasy story that I did a handful of illustrations for. Most of those illustrations were ruined in a recent basement flood but I hope to get a few posted for flair!

Water Logged Stories

The Parts are as follows:

  1. Part 1 – Intro
  2. Part 2 – Original Story
  3. Part 3 – Re-vised Story
  4. Part 4 – Stay-Tuned Surprise!

The Inspirational Video Below:

My Writing – The Phone Call

The Phone Call is the story of one woman’s past revisiting her in the future.

Length: 1 page

Genre: Fiction

Creation/Publication: 1995

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phonecall

The purpose behind this story was to see if I could write a short story in half a page. I have a tendency to long stories. I was reasonably happy with the results.

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My Writing – Heirlooms

Heirlooms is a short glimpse into the life of a daughter as she visits the decaying home of her youth.

The plan for this story was originally longer and larger, jumping back and forth through time and seeing different POVs. By the time I reached the end of page 1 I found that I was not really interested in the characters or the story that I was telling. I struggle with fiction stories and found this one, in my head, heading down a boring character study avenue.

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My Writing – Sea Trolls and Weird Water Witches

Sea Trolls and Weird Water Witches is the magical story of a what may happen along oceans and lakes, ponds and waterways all across the world.

Length: 1 page

Genre: Children / Fantasy

Creation/Publication: 2011

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The story was part of my 2011 NaNoWriMo collection. The original intention was to write an original children’s story every day (between 1,700-2,000 words) for the month of November. I made it through only a few stories before I realized how challenging it is to write kid/children’s stories. The word count, length, choice – all became a huge challenge for me.

Enjoy one of the few pieces I was able to finish during NaNoWriMo!

The story can be read here: Sea Trolls and Weird Water Witches

If you’re interested in additional stories, check out the My Writing section for more reading options!

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A few items to note when reading these stories:

  • Please enjoy them and feel free to let me know your thoughts. A writer always appreciates feedback when attempting to grow their craft.
  • Many of them remain unedited since their original creation date and contain misspellings, improper grammar and made up words. These are in here for flavor and as a time stamp to reflect my age when they were created.
  • Over time, I hope to include “Directors Commentary” in all of my stories. Hopefully this adds some flavor and context for the creative process and my thinking as these stories were created.
  • These are being shared for the benefit of the community and ask for respect to all who read, share, and comment on the material within.
  • All rights reserved. This material may not be published, broadcast, rewritten or redistributed in whole or part without express written permission. Contact skillpointstation@gmail.com if interested.

My Writing – Border Run

Border Run is the story of a once-great space pilot, over-promoted into uselessness and stationed at the far edges of known space.

Length: 3 pages

Genre: Science Fiction

Creation/Publication: 1994

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The story was loosely inspired by the PC game Wing Commander – which had a profound effect upon my youth. At the time I had only seen science fiction movies and read only a handful of books within the genre – so my ideas were fairly small. I decided to try putting pen to paper in this genre.

Stay on target…Stay on target!

Chris Roberts, creator of the entire series, wrote and directed the movie Wing Commander – which departed greatly from his established mythos. Curious as he was owner/writer/director for the property. It was a good popcorn flic – but could have been so much more. What was also interesting was the fact that the 3rd/4th/5th game installments revolutionized the full-motion video “movie-as-videogame” experience. They featured popular real life actors like Mark Hamill, Malcolm McDowell, John Rhys-Davies, and Thomas F Wilson to name just a few.

They all look so young!

EA (after acquiring Origin) eventually released an XBOX game called Wing Commander: Arena which had almost nothing to do with the broader universe but was fun to see some favorite elements on the tv screen. It was nowhere near as revolutionary as experiencing the PC game intro for Wing Commander 2 – Vengance of the Kilrathi for the first time. It was one of the first games to introduce fully-spoken voice within a game. The introduction is still impressive after all these years – check it out!

The story can be read here: Border Run

If you’re interested in additional stories, check out the My Writing section for more reading options!

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A few items to note when reading these stories:

  • Please enjoy them and feel free to let me know your thoughts. A writer always appreciates feedback when attempting to grow their craft.
  • Many of them remain unedited since their original creation date and contain misspellings, improper grammar and made up words. These are in here for flavor and as a time stamp to reflect my age when they were created.
  • Over time, I hope to include “Directors Commentary” in all of my stories. Hopefully this adds some flavor and context for the creative process and my thinking as these stories were created.
  • These are being shared for the benefit of the community and ask for respect to all who read, share, and comment on the material within.
  • All rights reserved. This material may not be published, broadcast, rewritten or redistributed in whole or part without express written permission. Contact skillpointstation@gmail.com if interested.